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The winterstorm of my brother's heart chapter 1

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The winter storm of my brother's heart

A/N: Okay here is a new story. I hope this will only be a few chapters and not a very long story. I will try to update my other story as soon as I can, but I will also start another new story soon, but I will wait until 'Life through another's eyes' and this one is done. But first, for those who have read my epilogue of 'The turtle who cried monster,' this is not the other version of the story I was talking about, this is another story, for those who haven't you are welcome to check it out. And second, I know this is similar to the new Disney movie 'Frozen' but I got an idea from it. I hope it's not to similar to the movie, cause I haven't seen it yet. We pick up after the events of 'Mutagen Man Unleashed.' On with the story. Enjoy!

Plot:When one of the turtles get his heart broken and realises he has an strange and dangerous new power, which he can't control, he decides to leave and start a new life, and with his new cold powers, his heart grows colder and colder. Can his brothers save him from his own curse before it's too late or will he live the rest of his life in coldness and despair? Based on the story Disney's 'Frozen.'

Chapter 1, Conceal, don't feel


"What do you think of me now, brother?"

"Why are you doing this bro?"

"With a cold heart, no one can hurt you, put you down or break your heart. Isn't it obvious?"

"I don't want to fight with you! You're my little brother!"

"Well, things can change. That little brother you once had is gone!"

"He doesn't have to be! I don't believe that!"

"Oh believe me, it is so. I'll never be who I once was."

"But why? Why have you turned your back on us?!"

"I am sick of being treated like dirt! I have done my best to make life easier for us, but what have I gotten for that? Nothing! Nada! Zip!

"I don't believe it..."

"Still think I'm too good-hearted, big brother?"


A few weeks earlier

(Donnie's P.O.V)

I still couldn't get over the fact that Timothy had turned on me. The once clumsy and in some way loveable guy I wanted to protect from thugs and that... mutagen, was gone, and had left a monster in his place. Right now I was pushing him back into my lab, and since my brothers didn't want to help me I had to do it myself. Since he was frozen he was also pretty heavy and hard to move from spot to spot, and that he was freezing didn't help much either. I had to stop every now and then just so my hands wouldn't get frostbitten. The eight time I removed my hands I took a look at them and noticed deep gashes on both my hands. I wondered when I had gotten them, but my guess was that I had gotten frostbitten and hadn't noticed. I decided to get Timothy to the lab before I treated them. I put my hand to his now frozen face and looked at him.

"Don't worry Timothy. We're almost home now. Then I can start working on a cure for you and April's dad." Then I started to push again and almost immediately pulled back. The frostbites hurt too much for me to keep on pushing him to the lair. I guess when my hands where still cold I didn't feel since they where numb and now when they had warmed up I started to feel that it hurt. I took out my Bō staff and took the cloth I had wrapped around it and tore it in two long bandages and wrapped it around my hands. It started to itch almost immediately, but I didn't care. I pushed him all the way back to my lab through the hole in the wall where he had escaped in the first place. I panted and leaned against my desk and looked at him.

"For someone made out of ooze, you're one heavy organism." I said and wiped sweat away from my brow. Then I unwrapped the 'bandages' from my hands and inspected my wounds. In the corners of the gashes I saw something light bluish.

"Hm, must be some of the ice from Timothy's container. Better wash it off." I muttered to myself and walked over to a sink to wash the gashes free from the dirt and ice. It stung a little, but not so bad. When I was done I wrapped my hands in fresh bandages and then walked over to the container where Timothy was and looked over him. His wide opened eyes and stiff arms and legs. The way that he looked at me when he realised the mutagen was fake and something was wrong with it. It broke my heart in a million pieces. Then I heard Leo call for me.

"Hey, Donnie! April is here and she wants to talk to you!" April? Here? What could she want? Even if I was happy that she finally came to the lair, I still had a bad feeling in my stomach. But I walked out even so and saw the red-headed girl and she had her arms crossed over her chest and looked pretty angry. I gulped and watched her in slight fear. But I walked over to her and tried to smile.

"Uh, hey April..." I said a little cautious and put my hand on the back of my neck, rubbing it nervously. April narrowed her eyes and put her hand on her hips.

"Donnie, I was studying with a friend tonight, when your monster came out of nowhere and attacked us! I would like to know why?" I felt myself grow cold and looked at my brothers who sat on the couch with a look that said 'get out now, please!' And they got the hint and left the room, and once they had I turned back to April.

"April, just let me explain..." But I wasn't let, April cut me off and she looked very, very angry.

"You sent him out to get me back to the lair, didn't you?!" I was shocked by her statement and shook my head so fast the tails of my mask whipped me in the face, and talked while I did.

"No, no, of course not! I would never force you to come back against your will! He was just..." Again she interrupted me and if looks could kill, there wouldn't be much left of me. Just a little pile of ash and a little frazzled cloth from my gear and mask.

"What? He just what?! He was just trying to kill me? To beat me up, and the burn me with his acid hands?! What was he trying to do?!" She looked me straight in the eyes and her face was full of anger and disappointment. I didn't know what to say, I lost my tongue and didn't get out a sound. All I could get out was meaningless stutters.

"I... Well... You see I... just..." But I couldn't get out anything that sounded like a good explanation. April just stared at me and then shook her head with a sigh of anger and disappointment.

"Urg, just forget it! You're not worth it! I hate you Donnie! I never want to see you or your creations again! And I hope you keep away from me from on! And you can stop trying to create that cure for my father, I'm sure you wont make it anyway, you're completely hopeless! I hate you!" And with that she ran out of the lair and left me standing there completely dumbfounded until her words made their way into my mind and heart and I felt my eyes water. I heard my brothers make their way back to the living room and I felt Mikey's hand on my shoulder in a gesture of comfort. So they had heard us. And although I appreciated his concern, I just shrugged his hand off and sat down on the couch. Leo and Mikey looked at each other and Leo sat down beside me and put an arm around my shell.

"Are you okay bro?" I sighed and looked at my older brother and tried to smile, but I knew it wasn't much of a smile.

"I guess so. Right now I feel a little bad, but I'll be fine." Raph looked at me with his arms crossed over his chest and just shook his head as if something was really pathetic, and I had a feeling that I was the one who was pathetic. And he decided to share his thoughts with all of us. like the caring brother he is (not.)

"Donnie, why do you let her speak to you like that? You should speak up for yourself and put your foot down!" He said and stepped down into the pit and stood in front of me. He looked at me with a raised eye brow and his arms still crossed over his chest. I looked at him, and first I didn't know what to say, but then I knew.

"Well, what was I supposed to say? That I spilled me feelings to him and that made him go after her so he could make a friend? It would have sounded crazy and she wouldn't listen to me anyway. I could have said anything about anything and she would have just what she thought and not listened to a word I said." Raph rolled his eyes and just sat down with his pet turtle Spike. But he wasn't done yet.

"I guess that figures. That's the problem with you Donnie, you're too good-hearted." My eyes widened and I raised from my seat and looked him straight in the eyes.

"Hey, I am not! I can be just as heartless as you!" Those words slipped over my lips before I could think them through, but Raph just chuckled and shook his head while feeding Spike with a leaf.

"No, you can't! You're a meek little nerd, and that's all you'll ever be. It's just a fact you need to face sooner or later." I just looked at him and then walked away from the living room and walked into the lab and started to work on an antidote for Timothy. Just because April didn't want me to cure her father didn't mean I should stop trying making a cure for Timothy. And as I worked and tried idea after idea, I fell asleep on the desk. I didn't notice the funny tingling in my hands.


As I woke up next morning I felt my back and neck was stiff. I sat up and stretched my back and neck to wake them up and then stood up. I saw the bandages on my hands had started to lose and fall from my hands. I took them off and tried to wrap them on again, but to my big surprise the bandage went limb and... covered in frost and ice. I was so shocked and scared so I dropped the bandage to the floor with a little scream. The bandage actually broke into small icy pieces and spread across the floor. I couldn't help but stare at the ice-covered cloth on the floor that was now nothing but pieces of ice. Then I walked over to the wall and touched it, which got a thick layer of frost. I couldn't help but stare at the result, then looked down at my hands. It wasn't until I heard a knock on the lab door that I snapped out of my trance.

"Donnie? Are you okay in there?" It was Mikey who was knocking on the door. He must have heard my scream, and now wondered what was going on in my lab. No! The last thing I needed was my brothers coming in here and saw what had happened. I walked over to the door so Mikey could hear my answer.

"Yeah, I'm fine Mikey. I just... dropped something on the floor. Nothing to be worried about. I'll be right out!" Mikey seemed to be contented with that answer. He just mentioned that breakfast would soon be done and then walked away. I quickly started to think about what I would do. I couldn't just waltz go out and try to touch things when I knew they would turn into ice and frost. And I couldn't stay in the lab all day. Then I got an idea and walked over to a pair of green gloves that I had put on a desk and began the great difficulty of putting them on without grabbing them by grabbing them with my teeth and try to push my hands into the gloves. It was a challenge, but I managed to do it after a few minutes of trying. And then I tried to touch another side of the wall and nothing happened. It wasn't the best solution, but it would have to work for now until I could figure out what had happened. Then I made my way out to the kitchen where the others was and had started to eat.

"Good morning guys, Master Splinter." I said and sat down. Master Splinter nodded at me and others said a little good morning to me too. But Leo noticed my gloves and looked at me and looked like a little question mark.

"Donnie, why are you wearing gloves? Aren't those for what you do in the lab?" The others looked at me and then at the gloves. But I was prepared for that question.

"Well, yes they are, but they are clean, and last night when I got Timothy back to the lab I got frostbitten. I just want to protect them from getting infected and I don't have any bandages right now. I'll have to get that before I can take these off." I said and raised my hands and showed my gloves to my family so they could see them. The others just nodded and bought that story. I would have to come up with a new soon since this one wouldn't hold for ever. But right now I would have to try to figure out what had happened to me.


Later in the lab I sat in front of Timothy and tried to figure out what had happened to me and how my touch now turned everything to ice and frost and even sometimes snow. My best theory was that the mutagen I had made for Timothy last night to make him freeze must have gotten stained on the glass of the container and made it's way into my bloodstream after I had gotten those gashes, thus making this effect, just like Midas, just instead of gold it was ice. Great, just great! Just like I didn't have enough to do right, now I would have to deal with this as well. Right now I would have to wear these gloves and just had to hide this new ability from my family. Even if that mean, living in the lab from now on or having to push my family away. I didn't want them to get hurt by this new ability... No, curse.

A/N: Okay, what do you think? I feel kind of glad with the result. But I hope y'all like it and leave reviews. I hope I'll be able to update soon. Whether it's thisstory or another one. Till next time, T.T.F.N, Ta-ta for now!


Plot: When one of the turtles get his heart broken and realises he has an strange and dangerous new power, which he can't control, he decides to leave and start a new life, and with his new cold powers, his heart grows colder and colder. Can his brothers save him from his own curse before it's too late or will he live the rest of his life in coldness and despair? Based on the story Disney's 'Frozen.'

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like it??? I LOVE IT!!!!! :heart: :heart: you are so awesome, you know that?